isha’s Reviews > Forgive Me Father > Status Update

Took a break to write this… Eden is stupid, it’s a common theme in books that the fmc find something out about the mmc. They never take a second to listen and that’s soooo frustrated. I get it you have to create conflict to keep it interesting but give us an actual conflict that makes sense instead of an argument that hold no ground.

Oke the goods: the spice is decent 🌶️🌶️… and that’s kinda where it ends. His age doesn’t really make sense especially with his back story, there’s an incredible amount of back tracking which is super annoying (I don’t mind back tracking if seeing it from a different perspective actually enhances the experience for the reader) I’m also missing some character development tbh… seems kinda blank