Skylar McCreless’s Reviews > A River Enchanted > Status Update

The plot is not plotting. I am LOVING the writing-style, for the most part, i feel some things rattle on but mostly love it. The Split POV is nice, would be better if it felt each POV was necessary. “World-building” i know, i know. But, i’d really like to be INTRIGUED rather than interested a fifth way through.