Zana’s Reviews > A Day of Breath > Status Update

"The fourth opens its mouth wide and the human skin on the right side of its face splits up to its temples. Several blunt teeth tumble out as it bares crowded rows of human and needlepoint-sharp fangs."

At least the demons are gross and cool 👹

So far I've been extremely underwhelmed, but at least this meeting between the champion and her shitty brown nosing family after ten years apart felt very realistic (awkward and full of tension)

This reads like a 15 year old writing their first book ever after playing hundreds of hours of RPGs 😬