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Somethings not sitting right with me with this discussion relationships between Japan, Britain and (lack of mention) the USA…
— Dec 20, 2025 02:15AM
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This far in and only 3 paintings… and it also feels like nothing has happened because of the constant thought tangents…
— Dec 21, 2025 03:00AM
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There are no blocks in London… That’s not how London was built…
— Dec 20, 2025 02:50AM
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The only joy I’m getting from this book is complaining about it.
That’s not how I would structure a paragraph of speech… or rather, there does not need to be two paragraphs.
— Dec 20, 2025 02:02AM
That’s not how I would structure a paragraph of speech… or rather, there does not need to be two paragraphs.
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What did he think was going to happen? He was told not to and to wait until things could be contained and he did not because ????
Also the contradiction of saying an accent is British and then following with the character knowing exactly where they were…
I know this means Queen’s English because that’s what people mean when they say British. However, it is no less frustrating.
— Dec 18, 2025 12:01PM
Also the contradiction of saying an accent is British and then following with the character knowing exactly where they were…
I know this means Queen’s English because that’s what people mean when they say British. However, it is no less frustrating.
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“I’m going to help people by doing the thing that will almost definitely put them in immediate danger…”
— Dec 17, 2025 01:48PM
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“I’ve only introduced you to 3 characters, so I’m from now on going to compare every new character to these 3 characters…”
— Dec 17, 2025 01:23PM
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Dec 20, 2025 02:30AM
Right, right, right, when mentioned it is as an “offhand reference”, so completely not the same way that other historical events are being spoken about. You know it is mentioned in an offhanded way because it is quoted to be so, and isn’t at all left up for the reader to make inference of. This is how you know the character is “bad” and the main character is “good”.
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