SPARKYSBPS’s Reviews > Mariposa > Status Update

“I call out, but he doesn’t move. He continues to count, and that’s when I realize he isn’t here anymore. His mind is somewhere else. peering over his shoulder on my tiptoes, I manage to glance at what’s keeping his hands busy. He’s carving wood. Before I can get more details, I tap his shoulder.” … specials ops you say? I’m surprised this woman survives going to the grocery store.

“He’s not so bad…the other night, I was attacked in the showers, and he took care of the situation immediately.” … and not a single person in that conversation acknowledges that she was attacked. I couldn’t make this stuff up if I tried.

“After using the restroom and fixing my dress, I wanted to find Kade and argue with him some more for trying to tell me how to spend my free time and punching a guy for looking at me.” … is this girl for real, she’s supposed to be a green beret, and she was dancing on a table with her tits out and the guy was trying to video that. I’m convinced this woman is an idiot.

“My hands in her hair, pulling it like I would love to do, as I deep-throat her.”… does she have a dingaling too? I’m pretty sure he’s trying to say he’s imagining f*cking her throat.

…” all the meanwhile looking straight into my eyes.” … yeah NO

“He presses his combat foot harder against his face, forcing him to whimper louder.” - as opposed to a non combative foot? Does the other foot not fight?

“It’s another weekend with our phones, the one before graduation. I have to survive seven more days, and I’ll be the first female in my family to join special operations”… another weekend with what??? Are you dating your phone? I’m confused.

“The muscle T-shirt shows off his back tattoos and the front of his chest - guns with skulls.” Ermmmmm is the shirt see through or does this lady have x ray vision because I’m pretty sure no soldier will be wearing a mesh gym shirt on base… and that’s the only way she would be able to see his tattoo through his shirt.

She’s 20 right? So far it definitely feels like it’s been written by someone who’s twenty. I’m giving it a chance though. Maybe it’s just because so far it’s been mostly her POV