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God, the dialogues and the inner-thoughts are so cheesy. Is it going to be like this the whole time? I mean they just met and they're already cheesy, so I can't imagine how it's going to be later...
— Mar 03, 2012 08:23PM
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Mar 03, 2012 09:11PM
Yep cheeseballs the whole time. I loved the kids though!
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I really like Gom .. but not to much the story so idk if I'm going to continue :s
Anna ϟ wrote: "I really like Gom .. but not to much the story so idk if I'm going to continue :s"
I'm a sucker for the stories with kids, but they are pretty corny. It gets better when the smexyness starts.
I'm a sucker for the stories with kids, but they are pretty corny. It gets better when the smexyness starts.
It's more Soldier and Dillon that I find corny. I mean, they just met two minutes ago but they're basically half in love with each other already (obviously i'm exaggerating.. but barely).
Anna ϟ wrote: "It's more Soldier and Dillon that I find corny. I mean, they just met two minutes ago but they're basically half in love with each other already (obviously i'm exaggerating.. but barely)."
Yeah, i meant dillon and soldier too, those two have a bad case of the insta loves.
Yeah, i meant dillon and soldier too, those two have a bad case of the insta loves.
Well, I just read your review and I'm going to give it another chance.
Gom was my favorite, but they all broke my heart.
Soldier and Dillon are an insta kinda deal, but then so many MM books use that, I didn't mind it so much. With so much abuse in the book I needed the fairy tale happyness aspect too lol.
Deeze wrote: "Gom was my favorite, but they all broke my heart.Soldier and Dillon are an insta kinda deal, but then so many MM books use that, I didn't mind it so much. With so much abuse in the book I needed ..."
I don't always mind insta love but here it kind of seems unrealistic tbh... Like they just met, but they already trust each other and plan a future together and everything. Dillon leaves Gom with Soldier to go take care of the kids.. I mean, idk but i don't think I could just leave my kid with a stranger like that.. maybe that's just me LOL
I guess thats where the art of suspended belief? comes in. The instant trust in a kindrid spirit? Plus it was Gom trusting to even speak to Soldier that made Dillon believe it was safe I guess. But yeah I get what your saying, it was fast.
And I get what you're saying. I'm going to continue the book but if it gets way to cheesy I'm probably going to stop :s lol it's weird that I say this cause I usually don't mind mushy and cheesy stuff in my MM books but now it just came too early in the book so yeah
