halia’s Reviews > Alchemised > Status Update
halia
is 67% done
for a book this long that “romance” went from 0 to 100 so fast. wtf happens in the rest of the book. i feel like it could be 400 pages shorter bc half this flashback is just repetition of various tropes.
— Dec 25, 2025 10:46PM
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halia
is 24% done
worldbuilding is actually horrible, very difficult to read this as an original work. also like… was ivf not an option…
— Dec 24, 2025 12:27PM
