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Julia is on page 212 of 653

1. Why is everyone named Thomas?
2. Significant personal moments that develop the internal character are glossed over; summarized in a sentence or two while incompreshensible conversations between indistinguishable characters are unnaturally written. No introduction; no context for the reader. Matter of style or poor writing? I just know it creates hiccups while reading.

— Dec 26, 2025 04:45AM

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Julia is on page 522 of 653

Why does the birth of Elizabeth get 1 page while discussing and interrogating Barton at least 5? It wasn't even clear who was present nor who was talking. Still having troubles with the style; I personally get very confused when people just drop into a scene without context and leave it without a conclusion. Like why are we here? What are we trying to achieve? Why don't you tell me what has been decided?

— Jan 07, 2026 02:56AM