Elyse’s Reviews > An Evil Spirit Out of the West > Status Update

There’s inconsistencies that piss me off.

“Malkata lies on the east bank.” Bitch it does not. And this isn’t the first instance of getting geography messed up in the Thebes area. It switches from Thebes to Karnak to Malkata with clearly no educated editorial influence to fix what the author has fucked up.

I do enjoy the story so far. But the simple inaccuracies ruin my suspension of disbelief.