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is 25% done
All of the magic and whimsy of the first book is completely missing. There is zero tension and hardly any action at all. The wordplay feels forced. Carroll should have focused on what made the first book so successful in the first place and given the readers more of that. Instead, we are left with fragments of what could be a potentially great story. Hope it gets better.
— 11 hours, 43 min ago

