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“Milo slams into me, retrieving a high-pitched squeal from me. He rotates the angle of his hips once more, tilting upward to pierce a deep, deep proud of me I’d not previously known.” This author should *not* be allowed to write sex scenes.

“You’re a dirty little slut, aren’t you? Just like me.” I have secondhand embarrassment for the author that she thought this was a hot line to write.

These sex scenes are so long and boring. Some authors should just not write them.

His POV when talking about Prue is so over the top and pure wish fulfillment to the point of being cringeworthy.

This male POV is painful. Painfully terrible.

These sex scenes are so long, tedious, and not even particularly hot. Where was the editor?

That Ch 16 sex scene was ten pages too long.