Mercury’s Reviews > Flesh > Status Update

It is in present tense. Which is a bit unsettling. Staccato dialogues. Characters come and go - without much consequence to the story or the main character. A third into the book, I’m still waiting to settle into this world - but the book doesn’t me to. The present tense, characters and events appearing and disappearing suddenly - don’t allow me to. Still intrigued where this is going.