Seabrooke’s Reviews > The Story Spinner > Status Update

Picked this up from the library cuz she’s been compared to Susanna Kearsley. I’m not far yet, but the story has promise. But the writing, oof. Run-on sentences and excessively long paragraphs, dialogue with lines where it’s unclear who’s speaking, lots of short and shallow scenes that make me feel a bit like I’m scrolling Instagram reels. She’s a bestselling author? I’m expecting an amazing plot. 😆