Tatiana Kundrat’s Reviews > The Luminaries > Status Update

Honestly I know it's YA but this is like the young end of YA twilight had more depth than this
The premise is cool
The world building good
Just for the love of God take out the Onomatopoeias that are like below junior high level.
If there isn't a teeth clicking there is an embarrassing onomatopoeia in every chapter. No I am not kidding.
I do not think I will continue this series unless it's free.