John P.’s Reviews > The Elephant's Journey > Status Update
John P.
is 2% done
I struggled with this from the first page. I really thought the premise was good, but the execution- oh my.
The execution was so clumsy that I couldn’t get past the lack of capital letters, run on sentences and lack of punctuation and non existent paragraphs. Most of the time I had no idea who was speaking - and considering I never got past two voices it was beyond annoying. DNF
— 2 hours, 36 min ago
The execution was so clumsy that I couldn’t get past the lack of capital letters, run on sentences and lack of punctuation and non existent paragraphs. Most of the time I had no idea who was speaking - and considering I never got past two voices it was beyond annoying. DNF
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