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Sanne
is 8% done
Whilst I like the idea.. at the moment the immensley long sentences and misplaced commas are putting me off a little bit. also the use of the word "cool".
it feels like shes putting way to much effort in describing that she loses the plot a bit. it has me reading as if Im marking my students work. Hopefully it improves.
— Jan 10, 2017 08:27PM
it feels like shes putting way to much effort in describing that she loses the plot a bit. it has me reading as if Im marking my students work. Hopefully it improves.
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Sanne
is 22% done
I just can't do it. This is soooo poorly written.. I don't know how people can actually look through it.
— Jan 19, 2017 01:31AM
Sanne
is 8% done
A huge, honking sanwich washing it down with a cup of the fresh, clean, absolutely delicious and very cold water from the pump.
WHY all these adjectives!!!?? I feel like I need to get my pen out and make side notes as what to improve. Goddd.
— Jan 10, 2017 08:33PM
WHY all these adjectives!!!?? I feel like I need to get my pen out and make side notes as what to improve. Goddd.
