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FromHeaven
is 85% done
I don't like the grovel so far. Or should I say not satisfied?
I wanted to read the scene where she tells him what she went through. I was waiting for it. Because those scenes were intense. I couldn't stop crying.
But it went off like a poof. Not even on page (properly).
Worse, it wasn't even in his pov. He wants to make it up to her and of course they make it sound and look like something sexual.
— 7 hours, 40 min ago
I wanted to read the scene where she tells him what she went through. I was waiting for it. Because those scenes were intense. I couldn't stop crying.
But it went off like a poof. Not even on page (properly).
Worse, it wasn't even in his pov. He wants to make it up to her and of course they make it sound and look like something sexual.
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