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As much as I like this, I do think that Rekosh’s conflict with his dad wasn’t done as efficiently as it could’ve been. Yeah, it’s discussed, but not a lot of time is dedicated to it, while the smut and the romance are given time. It just felt a little rushed and haphazard at points

Run-on

ELLLLLLLAAAAAAAAAAAAA IM IN PAIN

“”He sounds like Ketahn,” Telok said from behind.
“What?” Ketahn and Rekosh demanded simultaneously.”
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Typo

Oh ok so it was just a bone shrine. The bones weren’t animated. I was about to say

Run-on

The resurrection trope? Really? Yeah it’s cool, but it’s also still kinda lame. Like Zurvashi again? We couldn’t find something or someone else?

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