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Benniii
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Waylon is sweet.
Ashton and Angel are yuck. Hopefully they’ll get a massive smack in the face by something.
— Dec 28, 2025 05:58AM
Ashton and Angel are yuck. Hopefully they’ll get a massive smack in the face by something.
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Benniii
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All the long paragraphs of silent prayer gets in the way of the storytelling. Plus adding it to the conversation between the characters, there’s almost more talking to or about god than plot in certain chapters, and it makes the flow of the story less… flowy.
— Dec 30, 2025 02:38AM
