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Really love the story so far and how the people change once they have been exposed to the rain.
The way it jumps focus from one group of peoples perspective to another is well done and i found myself able to easily switch to the settings that the new perspective is in.

I would say the only thing that i am not really liking is the weird mentions of women’s breast most of the time its not needed…
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One Rainy Night

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