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D. Schutz
D. Schutz is 60% done
I think this book would have been better if it were a collection of poems instead of a prose-formatted novel. The constant jumps in the narrative: dreams, hallucinations, flashbacks, parallel stories told via interviews breaks up the narrative too much and the reader looses interest… “gorilla in the phone book” effect. The language is poetic, so it should be written in verse IMO
5 hours, 23 min ago
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D. Schutz
D. Schutz is 50% done
All the time jumps, including jumps in the present time narrative make this book chaotic to read
Dec 27, 2025 04:28PM
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