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Olivia
is on page 260 of 496
Shocker she’s the savior of the realm ! And she feels right being a goddess… shocking!!
— 22 hours, 2 min ago
Olivia
is on page 219 of 496
I feel like I know the MC is going to do something outrageous, and their “flirty banter” makes me want to throw the book across the room. Some of the lines are so cringey I can’t help but scoff audibly.
I’m just not connecting with FC and feel like the reliance is super contrived. World development is soooo confusing too.
— Dec 28, 2025 09:10PM
I’m just not connecting with FC and feel like the reliance is super contrived. World development is soooo confusing too.
Olivia
is on page 124 of 496
A bit trite, definitely heavy handed on pushing the main pairing. Pushing through but the plot feels choppy and overly convoluted. Romance feels more tell than show, considering how many times main character has told us how hot Jadon is or how she thinks she’s stunning so it’s no surprise that the sexual attraction is simmering between them *eye roll*. Trying to not DNF!
— Dec 28, 2025 05:27PM

