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AGAIN?! THIS HAPPENED IN MY LAST BOOK

Do not be dumb

Literally yup

You want to be like none shall sleep (insult)

I feel like this story shouldn’t have all the third person flashbacks
If you really wanted it to be something like this have flashbacks be only marlowes pov third person and his crush on her and then Izzy first person present with her mess

I mean

Stop the flashbacks now

Why have that chapter if you’re just going to have this moment? It makes it less memorable and impactful because we already knew before Izzy when we should have found out the same time we did but it feels like it’s just padding to the story

RED hair?

I keep forgetting to update