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He was far larger than her, far stronger, but in that moment, that counted for nothing, his body, his mind, his soul conquered. Surrendered.
"Mine," she whispered.

"Placing her palms on both his cheeks, he hissed."
I'm not a native but... Is this grammatically correct?

"Give me this, Quinton. Release yourself. Take the next step. [...] Say it for me, boy. Say what we both need to hear. Tell the truth about what I am to you now."

It's going to be so hard, Quinton. So difficult for you. I don't doubt this one bit. But I want it anyway. I want everything. [...] Give in to this. Give in to me.