Julia’s Reviews > Time Shelter > Status Update

I don't want to be mean, but... That's not a plot twist or anything. You factually told me that, IN THOSE EXACT WORDS, for the entire first chapter. Why would you think I would be surprised by this?

Part four was exceptionally boring. Do people understand that you don't HAVE to write a novel if you want to write an essay?

Aaaaaand we are babbling again

Completely unrealistic, but honestly, I don't care, this has gotten 100% more interesting in no time

Part two.
Part one was... words. And references to several other books. More words. And a good idea, so far not really explored.

I'm sorry?
A funeral home called memento mori?
U serious?

These are just seperate events.
Is there a story?

A little pretentious

I'm slightly confused