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“The men rose in unison and tossed their plates and cups into the wastebasket.”

I wonder what rising in unison sounds like? A collective creaking of knee joints?
Dec 30, 2025 12:34AM
On Earth We're Briefly Gorgeous

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“I kept fanning as Mai fed her, the two women, mother’s and daughter’s black hair fluttering in unison, their foreheads almost touching.”

What sound does fluttering hair make? Swoosh-swoosh?
Dec 30, 2025 12:41AM
On Earth We're Briefly Gorgeous


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