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Paul
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The fuck is the pacing in this book it’s been THREE YEARS???
Also, the constant jumping back and forth of perspectives within pages and paragraphs without clear transition indicators in the prose is insanely frustrating.
And how is it possible that no one has ever time traveled before since apparently you need a vision tied to the specific day and time to teleport? What is happening man
— 15 hours, 36 min ago
Also, the constant jumping back and forth of perspectives within pages and paragraphs without clear transition indicators in the prose is insanely frustrating.
And how is it possible that no one has ever time traveled before since apparently you need a vision tied to the specific day and time to teleport? What is happening man
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Paul
is on page 132 of 299
Pretty anticlimactic resolution of what has been the second biggest issue building this entire book.
— Dec 29, 2025 02:29PM
Paul
is on page 124 of 299
So much of the writing in this book is tell don’t show but I’m still confused half of the time. It doesn’t help how quickly we’re expected to remember names and alliances and world building situations when they’re not introduced particularly smoothly.
— Dec 29, 2025 02:14PM
Paul
is on page 104 of 299
So much information my darn head hurts. I’m so confused by the writing style - I never know when things are happening because only paragraphs later what I assume seems to be contradicted or not make sense.
What I do understand is entertaining though
— Dec 27, 2025 07:22AM
What I do understand is entertaining though
Paul
is on page 78 of 299
Okay that’s way more fun! I like the almost ant-like way that dragons exist (I think) in this world
— Dec 27, 2025 06:26AM
Paul
is on page 62 of 299
That was a lot. I do like that Lessa is kind of a little asshole. Still very confused about powers and what’s happening. Hopefully exposition soon.
— Dec 21, 2025 07:11AM
Paul
is on page 40 of 299
Fax is a little cartoonish for my tastes. Like not in a campy way.
— Dec 21, 2025 06:24AM
Paul
is on page 30 of 299
Okay now this is much more interesting. Lessa not boring is epic.
— Dec 21, 2025 05:50AM
