Marina’s Reviews > One Dark Window > Status Update

I am enjoying the plot but the writing keeps tossing me out of the story with tonal whiplash. Author is trying desperately for pseudo-midieval fairy tale but keeps leaking modern colloquialisms. Also, yes, Ravyn is the Captain of the Destriers and he has gray eyes. Yes, I get it! Stop telling me. Also this, "my smile did not touch my eyes." Ick. That's just lazy writing. Do better, Rachel.