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Dani
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I think we are gonna need to DNF this one. There are incomplete sentences, “BREAK” in between paragraphs, tense-switching, and several inconsistencies (character name swaps, 7:45 is suddenly 7:30, etc.)
— Dec 30, 2025 11:24PM
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Dani
is on page 37 of 334
I stg this author either rejects the suggestions from her editor OR doesn’t have editor lmao
— Dec 30, 2025 06:08AM
