Allie Lynn (EquineontheMind)’s Reviews > The Dogs of War > Status Update

Okay so the last 20% has been pretty good and I like Jackson now and the voices are really starting to settle in my head so maybe it’ll be 4 stars after all

Ooooooo spies? Things are getting very interesting now

Alll right all right Jackson is growing on me…

Does Crispin ever get called Crispy some times?

This scene should be from Atlas’s pov, NOT Blaise and should have been so much earlierrrrr

All right Lichenville Orcas got a laugh outta me

Okay over a quarter in, my thoughts:
* I need Blaise to shut up bc his POv is an interruption
* Luke’s POV could have been accomplished with a character watching a TV recording
* Atlas would have been a much more compelling protagonist
* I literally do not care if Remus lives or dies
* Jackson is sorta growing on me but not much he still feels very one dimensional

I feel like Atlas should have been the MC. ONLY Atlas and Jackson, at most. We have NO need to see Remus or Blaise or Luke’s POV. Like Atlas and Jackson would have been a good duo and I probably would care more about Jackson that way. As it is things feel so scattered I don’t have anything to anchor me into the story

These characters all talk so… weird. I can’t put my finger on it. It’s like the author is trying to make them sound fancy but they’re not fancy guys so their dialogue is disjointed with the mental image

WHY ARE WE BACK TO BLAISE AGAIN?!!!