Kenia Coronado’s Reviews > Sin & Fall > Status Update
Kenia Coronado
is 40% done
The plot is lacking development. There’s a story but i feel like the author didn’t develop it much in the mmc’s pov when hes on a revenge quest after the man that hurt his sister causing her to unalive herself.
— Jan 01, 2026 08:01PM
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Kenia Coronado
is 30% done
This gets right to the point! Theres not a lot of story building to start with but you get whats happening quickly. Just trying to figure out what got him to this point so quickly.
— Jan 01, 2026 02:15PM
