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Pearson opts to do more 'telling rather than showing.'

Our main characters tells us about some interactions that happen with the male leads, but we don't actually get to see these play out as readers.

This leaves me feeling a bit disconnected from the events and characters, and I don't feel very invested in their relationships or fates as a result.
3 hours, 46 min ago
The Kiss of Deception (The Remnant Chronicles, #1)

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