C Nels’s Reviews > Pretty Monster > Status Update

Made it 100 pages in and had to DNF first time in 2026x The writing is so poor. The authors personality comes through in every character and none of them have independent/original thoughts. Example, when the characters have an inner thought, ALL of them, for every single character begin with the hesitation of is saying “Hell,… insert thought here.” Or “Hell, I didn’t think it would be like this” So Bad.