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Whoa! Way to tight it all together

“He had lived lifetimes inside Hana, and when exhaustion overwhelmed desire, he dissolved, happily, in her embrace. He closed his eyes, enjoying the weight of Hana’s head on his chest.”

:(

Chile, I wasn’t expecting this

What do you want me to say, Hana? That nothing I did in my world truly made me happy? That I’ve spent my life trying to fill a void carved out by my mother? That when I came here, pretending to be all noble and saying that I wanted to help you, all that was really thinking about, was finally discovering something that would make me worthy of being love? You weren’t the only one who hid the truth.”

Ouch.

But whatever we feel for each other has no place in this world or yours.”

“It doesn’t have to belong to either of our worlds, Hana. It just needs to belong to us.”

The truth behind Hana’s world

Before he could retreat into any dream, he would have to endure restless hours staring at a smile that was never meant for him.”

I hate when pregnant women have to give birth in uncomfortable situations in fictional stories - childbirth is hard enough

...The worst things about choices..." Hana bit her lip. [....] "Is having to live with them."