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Natalie
is 46% done
Approx 92,000 words in and I’ve got 2600 highlights flagging ‘telling not showing’, excessively repeated words/phrases, sentences that either don’t mean anything or are just a rephrase of the previous sentence, flow/clarity/word choice issues and typos/incorrect grammar. At this point I am so close to a DNF but I’ve never done that in my life being the annoying completionist that I am
— Jan 03, 2026 04:51PM
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Natalie
is 32% done
This one is making me sad, so many interesting concepts drowned in some of the worst editing I’ve ever seen. How can a paid editor miss words or phrases being repeated quite literally hundreds of times?
— Jan 02, 2026 09:15AM
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Jan 03, 2026 04:56PM
Girl, I vote DNF but I also am a rage reader so I get it 😂
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Lina wrote: "Girl, I vote DNF but I also am a rage reader so I get it 😂"My girl you’re so right but now I feel like I HAVE to finish it so I can justify the review I’m going to leave 😭
