Magnes Miller’s Reviews > Into the Wild > Status Update

CHARACTERIZATION: Firepaw is pretty brave, trustworthy and loyal. In the story, Firepaw hadn’t eaten in a day when he was going to be tested. The clan gave the cats a mission to collect food and not eat it. He was loyal because he followed clan code and didn’t eat the food even though he was starving.

ARCHETYPE: My story best fits overcoming the monster. Broken Star wants to use the other clans hunting grounds because their kids are going hungry, but Thunder clan doesn't want them to use their hunting grounds. Broken Star says if you do not let us use your hunting ground, we'll kill you. Broken Star is the monster that is going to kill them.

ANTAGONIST: The antagonist in this story are the two legs because they are taking away land from the clan cats and neutering them. The text says that the two legs take more and more of the forest each year. This is significant because the clan cats live in the forest and the more forest they take away, the harder it is for the clan cats to get food.

I think the inciting incident was ether when Firepaw got attacked or when he had the dream about chasing the mouse

I think the inciting inscedent was either the dream where firepaw chased the mouse or when he got attacked

voyage or quest a have not made it far enough

SUMMARY: Rusty is the main character in my story. He is a pet kitty who wants to escape to the wild. Rusty jumped the fence and escaped into the forest where he met one of the wild cats. He meets the wild cats clan leader who tells Rusty that if he stays with his owners he will be neutered and will become lazy.

so far the main character is rusty rusty I think he dose not want to be a kitty pet anymore it takes place in cat view? don't know

I could picture a forest with a river at night in my mind while reading. The text says, “The silence was broken only by the ripple of water from the swift black river and the whispers of the trees in the forest beyond .” pg: 1. This helped me feel like i was in a nice forest at night.