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DarkChaplain
is 25% done
Having a bit of a hard time getting through the second chapter. Keep losing focus during the action. I like the setup of the different techmarine apprentices though. Might just be me being sick that distracts me from enjoying it more.
— Jan 16, 2017 02:38PM
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DarkChaplain
is 66% done
So far this is probably the one Horus Heresy novella I've found myself enjoying the least. All the interesting topics are skipped (The Carrion joining the Knights Errant, his escape from Mars etc), or immediately discarded (All cover characters beyond the RG are gone by chapter two...).
It doesn't work for me. The main plot idea feels stupid to me, and obviously won't work. Dorn seems like a buffoon too.
— Jan 18, 2017 08:30AM
It doesn't work for me. The main plot idea feels stupid to me, and obviously won't work. Dorn seems like a buffoon too.
