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Needs a good editor!! So much terrible grammar too! Eg. Chapter 15… ‘what made you what to become a heart surgeon’
There’s a lot of jumping between sentences and not articulating themselves! Plus it’s a bit boring!! Not enough plot! Character building has somehow bring missed off! And the FMC is a bit odd!
— Jan 06, 2026 03:02AM
There’s a lot of jumping between sentences and not articulating themselves! Plus it’s a bit boring!! Not enough plot! Character building has somehow bring missed off! And the FMC is a bit odd!
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