Joanne’s Reviews > How to Become the Dark Lord and Die Trying > Status Update

Getting better...

It's easier if i just read the FMC as a "Dave" rather than "Davi". Not sure the author has ever actually met a woman, because his FMC is more like a "frat boy" fuelled up on red bull and beer. Even the most butch of women I've ever met had never been this crass.

I'm still not sure about the delivery. On the one hand, the casual narration of the story adds to the humour. On the other (and this is a weird one for me) I'm mentally censoring because it turns out I have limits to the use of the "F word" 😄