Niamh’s Reviews > Bloodtithe: A Watcher's Tale > Status Update
Niamh
is 49% done
These watcher chapters are kinda pointless and now you’ve just told us something that you could have shown us with a Kael POV
— Jan 07, 2026 05:12PM
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Niamh
is 39% done
“You always did know how to make a girl feel special” haven’t you just met - better wording needed
— Jan 07, 2026 04:34PM
Niamh
is 27% done
God I think I hate this writing still. Constantly “not this… but this” BUT BUT BUT. And now we are in … territory. And so repetitive starting so many sentences with And or But or just repeating the same word at start eg Even blah blah. Even blah blah. Even blah blah. Shoot me
— Jan 04, 2026 07:06PM
Niamh
is 19% done
Eurgh the start was strong and intriguing but we have 3 POV and like it’s an excuse to say the SAME thing just over again… and the lassies POV is repetitive AF - inner monologue is tiresome. Giving it to 30% and might sack it off if it doesn’t get its shit together again. Oh sorry - 4 POVs…. Too many mate, too many
— Jan 03, 2026 08:00PM
Niamh
is 16% done
Take a shot every time the word IRON is used.. also but heavy on the metaphor and smilie - too descriptive
— Jan 03, 2026 07:37PM
