MARQUETTA’s Reviews > AWAKENING: A Winston Hills Novel > Status Update
MARQUETTA
is 58% done
DNF @ 58%
I don’t care that this is erotica. I care that it’s bad erotica. The sex scenes are terrible and repetitive. The author trying to make the scenes so nasty and filthy that they forget how to write from point a to point b. There was zero build up. What was the point of the prologue? That could have been left out cause what happened in the prologue is repeated later in the book.
— Jan 07, 2026 06:47PM
I don’t care that this is erotica. I care that it’s bad erotica. The sex scenes are terrible and repetitive. The author trying to make the scenes so nasty and filthy that they forget how to write from point a to point b. There was zero build up. What was the point of the prologue? That could have been left out cause what happened in the prologue is repeated later in the book.
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I feel like this is a setup and if it is I’m gonna be pissed
— Jan 07, 2026 10:44AM

