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yosann
yosann is 15% done
Why did he do that. It doesnt even make sense for his character at this point in the story WHY WOULD HE DO THAT. David i understand you kinda, but in this moment I feel as if u were possessed by some sort of spirit that wanted nothing more than to personally annoy me. Why would he go for a kiss hes legit a level one i hate him rnp. Stupid fanfiction ass book.
Jan 07, 2026 10:53PM
Coming in First Place (Between the Teeth, #1)

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yosann
yosann is 55% done
it was getting too comfy cozy sweet for me i needed this evilness again W david. it is almost 2 am bro what am I doing w my life
Jan 07, 2026 11:48PM
Coming in First Place (Between the Teeth, #1)


yosann
yosann is 35% done
Okay nvm W toxicity. David is so evil it warms my heart this is legit peak hater levels 😭 live laugh love, man 🥹
Jan 07, 2026 11:23PM
Coming in First Place (Between the Teeth, #1)


yosann
yosann is starting
Faahhhhh bruh im blind as a bat and my phones on b+w... i thought the cover was a soccer net and didnt even see the stick and puck i thought the guy was a soccer ball or something 😭😭😭 i was so excited for some soccer yaoi slop (little such occurrences), but alas, its hockey again 🫩 it s okay tho Im a bored loser anyway 🫩
Jan 07, 2026 10:12PM
Coming in First Place (Between the Teeth, #1)


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yosann Was this supposrd to be a slow burn bc im currently experiencing severe whiplash from how wild it feels being inside David's head rn. One second he hates Jack's (?) guts abs the next hes kissing him for no fuhreaking reason bro stop ihy. why do I read slop on purpose and then get confused when its sloppy.


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