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Dillon Person
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I am yearning for more dialogue. Motion prioritized description, so much so that conversations are paraphrased within the descriptive writing rather than written as dialogue with character voice. It’s making the book move slow.
However the imagery is written with great clarity, I can fully imagine the world.
— Jan 09, 2026 09:35PM
However the imagery is written with great clarity, I can fully imagine the world.
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