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At the beginning: I love the relationship between her and Hewitt. Nice introduction of family, and the world. Good worldbilding. Intro of love interest is well done.
Start of Call for adventure: the relationship sometimes gives me the impression of being a bit too much. New characters: good and believable.
He seems to fall first.
However: nothing is at stake so far. And I wished the soldiers would cause trouble
— Jan 10, 2026 11:53PM
Start of Call for adventure: the relationship sometimes gives me the impression of being a bit too much. New characters: good and believable.
He seems to fall first.
However: nothing is at stake so far. And I wished the soldiers would cause trouble
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