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“I’ve always wanted Chance to stay,” his dad said roughly. “That’s why I wouldn’t go to California. If I visited, or if I let your sister visit, I’d be giving up on you coming home to Ashe. And I could never do that.”

That's a pretty stupid reason for not visiting your kid for eight years... and why want him to stay in a small town where there's nothing for him?
Jan 20, 2017 05:47AM
Chance for Christmas (Ashe Sentinel Connections, #6)

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Tada... there it is, the big misunderstanding/fight... *sigh*
Jan 20, 2017 05:42AM
Chance for Christmas (Ashe Sentinel Connections, #6)


Kat
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I don't like Sarah all that much... every third sentence she mentions how she has/had feelings for her gay best friend and makes him feel bad about it. He's gay, he doesn't like you that way, so leave him alone... you're supposed to be his friend.

And the names Sarah and Sierra are too similar to not be confusing in the same story. Just sayin'
Jan 20, 2017 05:32AM
Chance for Christmas (Ashe Sentinel Connections, #6)


Kat
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Yes, we know, Sarah drank to much and is vomiting.... I already understood it the last five times it was mentioned.
Jan 20, 2017 05:25AM
Chance for Christmas (Ashe Sentinel Connections, #6)


Kat
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So far, all that the MCs and their friends have done, is embarrass themselves one way or the other. That's neither funny nor cute to read, but only boring and lame to read. I hope the story gets better anytime soon...
Jan 20, 2017 05:08AM
Chance for Christmas (Ashe Sentinel Connections, #6)


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