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Britney
is 96% done
I know nothing about hockey but the last scene with the narrating of game 7 was entertaining. Also there were brief instances where you felt the chemistry between them in the book. So there is potential to write something good. This was unfortunately not it though
— Jan 14, 2026 03:00PM
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Britney
is 96% done
This was bad. Im convinced the author didn’t proof read it or have any beta readers. It made no sense ‘you know all about my family in stockholm’ no i dont you didnt even mention them to him once. ‘How the team ralied aeound you both. No they railed around the both of us’ like wtf am i reading rn. There were more stuff along those lines throughout the book. The ‘smut’ scenes were also poorly written.
— Jan 14, 2026 02:55PM
