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Andrea
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I felt like the accident scene was condensed into a short paragraph in the middle of a chapter when it probably should have been its own chapter entirely.
I would have also liked to see more of the 3 years in which Simons soul was in another body. That felt like such a huge part of the story that was just breezed over too quickly.
— Jan 15, 2026 08:38AM
I would have also liked to see more of the 3 years in which Simons soul was in another body. That felt like such a huge part of the story that was just breezed over too quickly.
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Andrea
is 9% done
Also, I don't feel like there was enough character development that explained Shanna's Witchy abilities.
I ended chapter 2 thinking "oh...ok...so she's a very powerful witch that can apparently save a soul after someone has died? cool...I guess?"
— Jan 15, 2026 08:42AM
I ended chapter 2 thinking "oh...ok...so she's a very powerful witch that can apparently save a soul after someone has died? cool...I guess?"
Andrea
is 9% done
ooook, I'm barely on chapter 3 and I feel like A LOT has happened with very little explanation or reasonable development...I find the plot intriguing enough to continue but I do wish the author expanded on very relevant scenes such as the car crash and the subsequent 3 years.
— Jan 15, 2026 08:34AM
