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John
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Getting a lot better, the world and characters are a lot better written now. Though some things still feel rushed, like brodes acceptance of Ash and the 'I'm going to train you' trope without much of an argument.
— Jan 15, 2026 12:23PM
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John
is on page 350 of 554
Has gotten a lot better, good pace, interesting plot points, mystery and storyline. I can see the possibilities of the different plotlines building up in my mind and can see how things may link up. A lot more than an eragon clone, though some parts are very cringey
— Jan 18, 2026 04:02PM
John
is on page 50 of 554
First 30 pages were horrendous. Not enough description, lacking detail and some things contradicted themselves. Writing just felt really off. Seems to be picking up after Holt gets to the egg chamber. Also Ysera is missing an 'a' on her name page 38
— Jan 15, 2026 10:07AM
