FiftySeven’s Reviews > Broken Bonds > Status Update

How people are giving this a 5 stars? The writing is soooooo bad. I wanna annihilate some sentences from existence. I’ll try to push though cause the story looks interesting but ugh! The writing ruined it. If the author sees this, I’m ready to proofread for you girl, whoever is helping you.. is lying to you! I’ll edit for you for free just so I can read it properly.