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Diane
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I’m 3% in and already found two errors which doesn’t speak well for editing.
Diving teams had been in and out of the water all and these two were preparing for one last sweep.
Seems like “all day” or “all afternoon “ or some such word is missing.
It gave the impression she was oddly younger, like a girl wearing her mother’s house.
Surely that should be housecoat?
— Jan 15, 2026 03:27PM
Diving teams had been in and out of the water all and these two were preparing for one last sweep.
Seems like “all day” or “all afternoon “ or some such word is missing.
It gave the impression she was oddly younger, like a girl wearing her mother’s house.
Surely that should be housecoat?
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But Paige could still that subtle pressure.
Missing the word feel I think?
— Jan 16, 2026 08:13PM
Missing the word feel I think?
